Research and planning - feedback from audience.

- Once we showed our film to an audience we realised that the ending of our opening two minutes was pointless and just dragged on as it just showed walking down the pathway and wasn't engaging. From this we are going to make certain changes. We have are going to change the beginning scene as we are going to introduced a new location and scene which is at a graveyard and the victim ( me ) going to her friends grave bryony and reading a letter which was from bryony as she was killed from the antagonist and it shows the antagonist being there at the grave when the victim ( me ) doesn't know that the antagonist is there. We then see the antagonist scrunching up the picture which the victim ( me ) had which i dropped. Furthermore, we are going to put the institution after that then we've put the beginning of the scene we had on the draft of our opening two minutes to the end. Which has made the film more linking with a horror genre film. For our soundtrack we are going to create it ourselves by using a piano. The sound we are using is going to happen when the antagonuist appears which shall the audience more in suspense and the music shall make it create more tension within the opening two minutes.